First of all, that was very hot and very cute. But ... yes, there is a BUT.
I remember Dean saying (in one of the previous parts) that in hell, Sam forced him, raped him, made him "take it" or something. That the "Sam" in hell dished out a lot and Dean had to comply and endure and just take whatever Sam wanted.
I see no indication of how Dean has gotten over that, I see nothing that distresses Dean at all at the prospect of that kind of sex, I don't see the typical reactions of a victim/survivor of continued rape.
It doesn't mean that your plot isn't valid, but dean's read acceptance, his ability to just "forget" everything that has happened to him in the past is somehow not quite believable to me.
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Date: 2009-12-28 06:39 pm (UTC)I remember Dean saying (in one of the previous parts) that in hell, Sam forced him, raped him, made him "take it" or something. That the "Sam" in hell dished out a lot and Dean had to comply and endure and just take whatever Sam wanted.
I see no indication of how Dean has gotten over that, I see nothing that distresses Dean at all at the prospect of that kind of sex, I don't see the typical reactions of a victim/survivor of continued rape.
It doesn't mean that your plot isn't valid, but dean's read acceptance, his ability to just "forget" everything that has happened to him in the past is somehow not quite believable to me.
I still enjoyed your story very much. =)