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title: A Woman in the House
author: [livejournal.com profile] fannishliss
rating/spoilers/warnings: Gen, no warnings,  set during 6x01
words: 572

A/N & summary: for [livejournal.com profile] kalliel from her prompt: Bobby's appraisal of Lisa after Sam and Dean have gone back to hunt the djinn in 6x01

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Bobby felt guilty with a woman in the house.

It wasn't Lisa's fault.  She didn't frown at the years' buildup of grime, or the state of the fridge, or the empty bottles, or the guns Bobby hastily locked away.  

She watched Dean with him, and she looked at him with respect, and suggested her boy call him Mr. Singer, and goddamn it if Bobby didn't blush.  

He was a fool, and he thought he was past all that.

"Just Bobby, okay," he said gruffly.  "I'll go see to your room."

Lisa followed Bobby up the stairs, semaphoring to the kid, who plunked himself on the couch and brought out his gameboy or whatever they called it these days.

"Thanks," Lisa said.  Her voice was strong.  Bobby's heart broke for her and he prayed he'd be proven wrong.  

On the landing Bobby turned.  

"Anybody those boys brought here, I'd take 'em in. Nothing special," he ground out, playing rotten codger to the hilt.

"Ah," Lisa said, the fire lighting in her eye.  "You probably know Dean shouts in his sleep, and I know a lot more about things than I let on."

"What things," Bobby said.

"When he cries, for Sam, for his dad, for you," Lisa said softly. "You mean so much to him.  It kills me that he thinks he can't have one foot in your world, one in mine."

"Well he can't," Bobby said.  "He'd be a damn fool to get back in.  He has this chance with you, he's goddamned taking it, if I have anything to say about it."

Bobby sized Lisa up.  She was a hell of a woman, staring him down, but she wasn't angry, or pitying, nothing but strength there, and damn, she did love Dean.  

Bobby turned away to hide the burning in his eyes.  Sam had broken Dean's little idyll all to hell.  At least he'd had that year, that one year, to rest, to love, to have what he'd never gotten the chance to have before.  And Lisa had given it to him.

Bobby pulled the sheets out of the linen closet, some that Karen had chosen, beautiful linen sheets that didn't show their age.  

He led Lisa into the guest bedroom, and they threw the bedspread back, and dressed the bed in silence.

"Thank you," Bobby said, and coughed.  "For Dean.  For being there."

Lisa didn't speak till she caught Bobby's eye.  "He's worth it. It's a risk, but it's one I'm willing to take."

"If god weren't a hack, and a drunk, and awol, I'd be praying for the two of you, that it would work out."

Lisa frowned, and nodded, and she followed Bobby back down stairs and helped him chop the vegetables she'd brought for their supper.  

Ben came in, and Bobby's eyes widened when he got a good look at the kid, and Lisa blushed with a fraction of a nod.

Bobby prayed harder than ever that night, prayed, and prayed, and hoped someone out there could hear, and would care, and in the morning he fixed Dean's favorite eggs, and Ben wolfed them down and asked for more, which Bobby happily provided, and Lisa's laughter rang through the kitchen like the last yellow sunlight before the storm clouds rolled in.

Date: 2011-12-17 01:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] killabeez.livejournal.com
God, this is so sad in so many different ways. I love getting a glimpse of them together, though. And that last paragraph kills me.

Date: 2011-12-17 05:11 pm (UTC)
ext_29986: (Dean/Lisa Love!)
From: [identity profile] fannishliss.livejournal.com
It's certainly very bittersweet, what with Bobby, his house, and Lisa all being out of Dean's reach now. They wanted so much for Dean that he didn't believe he could have. :(

Date: 2011-12-17 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
What an amazing moment that I've never seen presented before! I love Bobby's response to Lisa, and Lisa's strength...

"Lisa's laughter rang through the kitchen like the last yellow sunlight before the storm clouds rolled in."

And that line is heartbreakingly pure gold.

Date: 2011-12-17 05:09 pm (UTC)
ext_29986: (the Promise Lisa)
From: [identity profile] fannishliss.livejournal.com
I never imagined Bobby and Lisa until this prompt. Lisa's a person with a different background, but the kind of person she is, very straightforward, smart and self-sufficient, I think would appeal to him right away.

Thanks so much for commenting --knowing you think their reactions worked makes me very happy!

Date: 2011-12-17 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bowtrunckle.livejournal.com
What a lovely fic. I like the glimpse into the lives of the supporting characters. It reminds me that SPN doesn't have to be just Sam and Dean and that others have the potential to be more fully realized if given the chance.

Bobby's eyes widened when he got a good look at the kid ... he fixed Dean's favorite eggs, and Ben wolfed them down and asked for more

I love what you're implying here. The fact you left it as such is really nice.

Date: 2011-12-17 05:07 pm (UTC)
ext_29986: (the Promise Lisa)
From: [identity profile] fannishliss.livejournal.com
Yeah, over the course of time we have met so many interesting people, and Lisa is among my favorites. I feel like so much about her has been hinted and left for us to explore. She's a wonderful character.

Teehee, there was a smidgen of subtlety there. :D

thanks for the lovely comment!

Date: 2011-12-17 04:53 pm (UTC)
kalliel: (gumby girl)
From: [personal profile] kalliel
Eeeeeeek, this is everything I would have hoped for and more! Bobby's voice here is excellent, and I love the tentative awkwardness and yet wholesale affection with which Bobby accepts Lisa and Ben into his home. And Lisa here, unf. There's my gorgeous, powerful bb. <3333333

Thank you millions, Liss! I looooooooooove you, and THIS. This. <333

Date: 2011-12-17 05:06 pm (UTC)
ext_29986: (the Promise Lisa)
From: [identity profile] fannishliss.livejournal.com
SQUEE! your comment made me very happy!

I love Lisa, so I'm super happy that my portrayal worked for you.

Yay! and thanks for the recc!!

Date: 2011-12-17 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rince1wind.livejournal.com
This was lovely. Makes Dean's relationship with Lisa seem that much more real -- like that year actually took a year and things happened in it.

Date: 2011-12-19 12:25 am (UTC)
ext_29986: (Dean/Lisa Love!)
From: [identity profile] fannishliss.livejournal.com
thanks so much! I spent a HUGE amount of time summer after s5 working on Dean's relationship with Lisa and the way Sam might've gotten out of hell, so it feels very real to me. If you're curious, it's called the Promise verse. :D Of course it's all au now, but happy ending!!!

I can't stand the way Lisa's mind was wiped..... that's a huge shutdown of the potentiality of canon for me.... I hope there'll be some kind of fix some day.... but doomed as Dean is, I doubt it.

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